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Alone,


Perhaps the simplest way to express this collage of emotions.






(empty?)
Alone,


Not just loneliness, or despair, or sadness, or hopelessness.






(incomplete?)
Alone,


Could be all of them, but none all the same.






(confused?)
Alone,


Refreshing for a brief moment, then sets up camp.






(for what purpose?)
Alone,


Haunting me, no, teasing me, with the promise of freedom.






(is freedom ever free?)
Alone,


Separate even from myself, seeking to pull myself together.






(can I stay strong?)
Alone,


Looking for the glue, or cement to hold me together.






(who is it?)
Alone,


Sick of trying to fight it, instead, embrace the emptiness before it engulfs me, and I become unable to

escape. Perhaps within the emptiness lies the key to my happiness...






(alone? no, not me)


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