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When I feel alone I think about you ,
and feel you through the moon.
When I feel depress , I think about you ,
and I feel that you sit beside me .
When I feel hurt and want to cry .
I feel you already joined me and offering your shoulder.
When I feel jubilant and want to feel you
but I feel you leave me with my friends .
CASPER you thinks I need you at every turn in my life,
but you are wrong my dear ,
because I need you at every moment in my life.


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Nice...
...poem, sentimental. keep up good work.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: March 28, 2006 )





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