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Cherry Red ; Snow White,
A great fusion.
Spring flourish.



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The following comments are for "Fusion of Spring"
by page3

page3/ Inspiring
p3- Hope you don't take offense:

flourish

cherry red
snow white
spring fusion

This is senryupsyched version, inspired by your poem. Clipped five words.

I find your takes interesting.

Enjoyed,
Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 23, 2006 )

No offence :
It is good to say the wrong things and i want to mend my faults.
Thanks,
keep on giving suggestion it is good for me as im new in this feild.
Again thanx.

( Posted by: page3 [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )





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