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How do you explain,
How we feel inside,
When something is missing,
And nobodys listening,

Or for that matter cares,
Of anything in life,
But their fees and fares,
And their own biographies,
and cinematography,

Or the way they look,
And the time it took,
As the world spins faster,
On the fingertip of the master,

When will it stop,
So i can get to the top,
And no loger be forced to wait,
For my missing piece,
My Soul Mate.



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The following comments are for "Pieces of me."
by dionnemarie

Pieces of me
Very good read,,,Seems that we are constantly searching for something in life whether it be the all mighty dollar or our one true soul mate. I like the descriptiveness of the world spinning on the almighty,s fingertip. I can relate to the subjects constant yearning for completeness. Again very nice piece. Thanks for shareing and "Keep on inkin the Pages"
Poison

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: March 23, 2006 )

Pieces
Iliked this one, a lot. It read well, and the impact of the message was clear and concise. I'm sure most people have the same questions and attitude about life as you so well expressed. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Cheers!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 25, 2006 )

soulmate
So very many people sure could realate to this piece. So very well writen and so very meaningful. A very enjoyable read loved it.
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 2, 2006 )





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