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It is said that people live in search of their soul mate, their one and only. I don’t know if you’re my one and only but I do consider you as a soul mate. You touched my soul and because of that I consider our relationship to be much more then friends…Our bond is deep…strong…and everlasting…
For a person to touch an others soul is something sometimes indescribable in mere words. To describe this we need to combine words with nature’s beauty, with colors, with the touch of love that can only come from the deepest part of our hearts…The part that never dies but lives on, the part that is pure and sacred… All these elements combined into one extraordinary piece of art. For this is the only way to describe something so beautiful, so sensual, so heavenly that is you.
I love you now, I will love you tomorrow and I will love you forever more, till the heavens fall down and time is no more.

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The following comments are for "Soulmate"
by deraj

Yo, welcome to the LIT group. First and foremost, warm welcomes, second, great piece man, you know I'll be awaiting more pieces from you...SOON :D
And swa, I tambe, no skirbie solamente ora bo ta enamora of deprimi :D

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: March 25, 2006 )

WOW so very heart warming and beautiful loved reading every word of it. I think you have hit it on the head could not of said it better Excellent job

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 2, 2006 )

Thx alot for the comments i appreciate them alot :). I will be posting more pieces within a few weeks.

( Posted by: deraj [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

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