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Dew over the grass ,
A little drop
White pearl of happiness.

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The following comments are for "nature"
by page3

There are few words in the english vocabulary which are as vast as nature. When one says nature it can mean; Water, Fire, Earth, Wind. It can mean that which is around us. It can mean the instinct within us etc etc.Giving such a broad name would make me think that the poem would be just as vast.
I have to say i didn't enjoy this as much as your other haiku, but it could be that it seems thoughtless. It seems you tried to copy a style of art in this poem, not actually write a poem.

Maybe its me.

Anyway, keep writing, keep the spirit.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: March 21, 2006 )

may be !
It was my first Haiku and i wrote this between my exams before a few days. My mom said it is fine so i put it here.
Well i will try best in my next thanx to suggest

( Posted by: page3 [Member] On: March 25, 2006 )

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