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Im like a butterfly fluttering
Above my sensations,
Looking for freedom behind
cell walls.

I seek you, after a long
.. inexpressible event,
a lifetime of need,
to crawl into your arms
and let go of all that
has passed, and all that is
present.

I want to let go now,
To surrender my tears,
My fears, my joys,
All to you. In the hope I
May find peace in your
Everlasting presence.

I find security where you are,
I find an uplifting spiritual movement
In the company of you.
Your smile, your touch,
The way you see me,
I find myself anew.

You look right through me
Like you can understand my every
Thought, from the time of birth,
Until the moment our eyes meet.
I cannot hide, I yield my wings
And wait for you to lift them
With a tenderness Id never known.

I am who I want to be in your eyes.
I am who I aspire to become when
You look at me.
Hold me safely, keep me from
Lifes way. Hold my hand,
And embrace my soul. My wings
Need a mending, a loving,
A reviving so powerful to uplift
Its pastel being into one just
Liberated.

March 19, 2006


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"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding" Khalil Gibran, The Prophet




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The following comments are for "Liberating"
by Serendipity

would you believe
So would you believe me if I say there is no one in my life? Just a stream of thoughts....of someone I can envision.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: March 20, 2006 )

Liberating
I believe you...to know or to defer to to "that" which can't be explained and yet we know it is ever present, always accessible and will never leave. I so very much loved reading this poem. Thank you for sharing this jewel.

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 22, 2006 )

...
well, i thought i knew who this was talking about, but since it's a "thought of someone" you "can invision", i guess i don't. unlike, some of your most recent poems, i actually think i understodd this one the most. and whoever goes through your writings would think that you're-let's just say- not so lucky when it comes to relationships. so as much as i loved how fuzzy and warm this can get, i wish you happier,(hopefully existent) dreams for the future.

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: June 30, 2006 )





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