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As you did always
leave me in the darkness
never saw the colorful utopia
but tired of insomnia

No arbours, no rainbows
where could I find blue water confluences
never saw any evergreen forest
but barren desert

No heartful glance; smiles were faded
couldn't find a single gracious face
never saw any day good way
but still I must stay

------
malyawan


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by malyawan

Still I Must Stay
Malyawan, this poem carried a profound message and the way you expressed it was richly satisfying. I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 22, 2006 )





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