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I am honest and kind.
I wonder over the worlds state of mind.
I hear the constant hustle of the teenage life.
I see the swift aproch of another restless night. I want to lie my burdens down at last, But
I am as always, deturmend and steadfast.

I pretend to be someone grand.
I feel it would be easyer to grasp a grain of sand.
I touch always the feet ot success.
I worry that I shall never grasp it's hand.
I cry over all that I have lost, but
I am a dreamer who is vigilant at demand.

I undersand the road of life is rough,
I say it is worth living.
I dream of easy days, of a family.
I try to persivier, to be tough.
I hope one day that I can show.
I am honored and blessed beond all you know.

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To live ones life free from the constraints of judgement is truely bliss.


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The following comments are for "A True I Am"
by crackpotpoet

RE: A true I am
Dear Jason, Good ideas here. You need to edit
a little{ I have that same creative spelling at times} But a well expressed poem. You show great heart. bonnie

( Posted by: bonrudo47 [Member] On: March 22, 2006 )





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