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Maybe, it'd be better for you. Better for me.
If this love we shared, could be set free.
Forget all the anger, forget all the sorrow.
Let's just live, for tomorrow.
In your present, I shall not be.
Though I am in your past, please don't forget me.
Don't forget what I meant to you.
And I wont forget what you meant to me.
Remember the good, never the bad.
Try not to think about the life we could of had.
Together with you, forever with me.
Though our love was strong, this wasnt to be.
Maybe, it'd be better for you. Better for me.
If in this life we live, there is no "we."

When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.

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