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I want someone to remember me,
When I go away.
I want someone to miss me,
When I go away.
I want to do something nice,
Before I go away.
I want to say something nice,
Before I go away.
I want to do one last good deed,
Before I go away.
I don't want you to cry for me,
When I go away.

By :- GSVK

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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "When I Go Away"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Very Nice
G.S.V
This is very nice, enjoyed the write...Been very busy with our nonprofit organization..will be returning soon, I pray.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 16, 2006 )

When I go
this was lovely, especially the last 2 lines...thank you!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 16, 2006 )

Thanks....
...Jeannie and Eleda for ur nice comments.

Bye

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: March 18, 2006 )

Simple but deep
Surely this poem is simple as mine 'Casper' but its deep and have good lyrics.

( Posted by: page3 [Member] On: March 23, 2006 )

Leaving too soon-
Nice sentiments, but please don't go for awhile- write more :)

Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: March 23, 2006 )

Hi...
Page3, I will read ur 'Casper' and let u know. Thanks for reading.

Hi Elizabeth, I will surely write more if I have nice readers like u. Take care guys...

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

thanx
Thanx 4 let me know and thanx 4 reading

( Posted by: page3 [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )





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