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Mystic whisper Soulful bain
Silent mentor Unveil domain
Emote the will Purge the soul
Reflects a well of deep resolve

Hypnotic speak Alluring prose
Arouse the seer in repose
Transformations do empower
The inner child upon the hour

knowledge empowers

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by huria

I really liked this. Your style is unique in that I haven't seen someone mix phrases and rhyme this way before. I have to say that I enjoyed it a lot. It's quite inspiring. Nice work and I hope that you've got more like this posted. ^_^ Keep writing.

( Posted by: silentgoodbye [Member] On: March 17, 2006 )

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