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Is it real you don’t feel my breath with yours as you sleep
Holding it in deep
Not to let go of the sirens that weep
As you ache with a thought or with another thought
you leap
And even though in your arms my soul you keep
I can’t disturb a thought
For the thought is you
And that breath
For that
Is worth being held in…still… so deep

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