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Crown the strings of my desire
eternal flame burns in the fire
Searching for the rainbows vein
quench your thirst in purple rain

Strum the beat on eagle wing
yearning heart forever sing
Golden seal shut out the pain
I long to see your face again

The light evoked intends to daze
I feel you in the mystic haze
The bell tolls on the watchtower
heralds you in the magic hour

------
knowledge empowers


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The following comments are for "Jimi"
by huria

Jimi
As a fellow jimi fan i can appreciate this poem. A good expression of what jimi means to u. Well done

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: March 13, 2006 )

WOW
I have to agree with dentt this is an awesome expression of what lives in all of us....cheers to you man keep it up...

Peace out

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: May 17, 2006 )





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