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- One is for the hope you bring
I feel it in my heart
- Two is for the light within
I do not feel apart
- Three is for good wishes
of peace amongst mankind
- Four is for the foresight
that opens up the blind
- Five is for your counsel
so gentle and so wise
that brings about a change of pace
and lessens my demise
- Six is for the lessons
some hard but oh so true
that if you were not in my life
I'd be forever blue

There comes a time in each ones' life
when choices must be made
I will not lie! I will not die!
for I do know your name

knowledge empowers

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