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I heard a whisper on a breeze
it told of days to come
Do not despair or fear the truth
or you shall come undone

The time is near when you will hear
of things that are asunder
Deep in your heart the light will shine
and there will be no thunder

A world of peace and harmony
is promised to be shown
Goodwill to all in this lifetime
is surely to be known

knowledge empowers

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The following comments are for "Whispers"
by huria

A positive read...nicely done!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 13, 2006 )

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