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He'll go around with anyone
Kiss any mouth
Christen any girl's bed sheets
in sweat
Make Byron a cheap pick up line.

A ruse I keenly fell for.


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The following comments are for "Boy slut"
by MsZ

boy slut
All the boys I know act like sluts because they think that's how they are supposed to be because their friends are that way too. I like your poem very much. Do you mean like Lord Byron?

( Posted by: tomasini [Member] On: March 12, 2006 )

genius
sometimes i think the poems with the most bite are the shortest. not wasting words, just to the point.
"A ruse I keenly fell for." so smartly delivered.

what is weird was i was just having this conversation with a friend of mine.

( Posted by: ruina [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )





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