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I only know him in my sleep
where he sleeps with me
Nothing good comes easy
Nothing good comes to me
Do you hear the same sad
love songs and think of me
Or do you think of her, lying
close to you? I promise,boy
she won't love you like I do.

Then I envy her breath
that warms over you, I envy her
fingers that clutch your's in the
night I envy her face as you gaze
in her eyes I envy I envy

Most hateful I envy.


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The following comments are for "Envy"
by MsZ

interalized sexism
how quickly i am his victim.
yeah, this was another thing we talked about. girls i would have liked if it weren't for men.
it reay has that sick to the stomac feeling when you see her quality to it.
and i always love how you end your poems. most always i love.

( Posted by: ruina [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )

victim of need
I remember a more confident side MsZ. The MsZ that always wrote from a place of power. This is sad to read for more than one reason. It reeks of need/grasping desperation. Good writing, but sad side of the coin.

( Posted by: Ashmedai [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )





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