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Soar like an eagle
Thru the sky
The long white cloud
Bares no disguise

The mountains beckon
The morning dew
The lakes the rivers
reflect the hue

Of life so young
And yet so old
The taniwha
Who is so bold

Aotearoa the blessed one
may all your people
bask in the sun
And show the world everyday
Aroha is the only way

------
knowledge empowers


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The following comments are for "Reflections"
by huria

Delightful
Two words I didn't know the meaning of but it didn't matter because the poem read like a little gem. I got the gist of your message. Thank you!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 18, 2006 )

Reads like a song
This was a delight to discover! What musical lilt and I agree - the unusual words don't impede it at all. Give us more like this!

( Posted by: the demure 1 [Member] On: March 18, 2006 )

reflections
thank you for your comments,i haven't written for long,aotearoa is nz, taniwha is the water spirit of the maori people and aroha is the love in your heart,I haven't been to my homeland for twenty years and miss it so very much,imagine that a song hey,sincerely huria

( Posted by: huria [Member] On: April 1, 2006 )





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