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O shaft O Ray
Mine eye to see
Vallant the knight
Peers o'er thee

Thy sword Thy armour
Gleaming might
Thine enemies aflight

O sturdy steed
Noble indeed
Mine heart rears
O'er the sea

Tho' gallant glisten
O the sun
Mine heart beats
Verily

Soar on high ebon sky
shimmers deep nae aweep
returns to thee mine soul
Awash e'er afree




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knowledge empowers


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