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Don\'t dream about your future lost.
Or the past, been wiped away.
Just steady stare at the path ahead.
Splinter-laiden, stabbing rain.
If you settle on the imperfections,
they\'ll take you down with ease.
So just keep up the pace, life or death\'s a race.
Stay a step ahead of them now.
pop pop...stomp stomp.
keep in rhythm with the beat of the world.
Don\'t fall out of line, it\'ll cost you a fine.
And you\'ll never catch back up again.
Eyes stay straight, direct, don\'t waste
your time on promisies you can\'t keep.
Don\'t dissapoint more than you must,
or your true thoughts people will see.
Transparent as a sheet of glass.
Your weak, dispensible,a dn vain.
So just keep your stare steady set,
splinter-laiden with stabbing rain...

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Charity


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