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DAYDREAM
by Thea (Member) - published: March 11, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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Daydream

See, your words just smashed my frown,
sent my soul swaying.
heart pumping heat,
lungs resting,
tongue on my lips,
stomach firing my spine,
to my shoulders,
stretching my neck,
closing my eyes,
into one of those daydreams,
tantalizing,
like yourself.

11 March 2006



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by Thea

wow!
I love the metaphors you used...very original!



RESPECT

( Posted by: tap5000 [Member] On: March 12, 2006 )





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