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--Bad and--

Be and somewhere will notice
Be and someone will see
Be and someplace will rise
Be there to catch a falling tear
Be away when trouble starts
Be aware and miracles happen
Be faithful you'll learn
Be righteous and you'll be hated
Be careful some what unnoticed
Be unnoticed none will care
Be to good get framed
Be mad get praised and promoted
Be lost and begin finding answers
Be and be found
Be and be lost





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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by bhagwandave

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beautiful! loved it! good job. keep writing.
All the best, Thea

( Posted by: Thea [Member] On: March 12, 2006 )





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