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Words wound but donít break me
So I lay them aside but wonít abandon them,
An exchange has been made instead.

I will live the voice,
the very voice that kept life on hold
until I was here and ready to be alive.

Saturated in thoughts,
mesmerized by desires,
life takes on what can and will be.

Seasoned dreams lead my choice
And I choose to own the words,
before my words decide to own me.

I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Own the Words..."
by nae411

Why own anything?
This was written with elegance nae. But, personally, I see things through a different lense I guess. Words can't hurt you. It's the power and the attachments that you have to the words. You can own and choose what and where your energy is placed, but not those things in which you pace it on. This, of course, is only my opinion. I know the journey of finding one's self. It's a painful one. It ended, for me, that their was no such thing as self. Only ego which is never truth. Keep it up, good work!

( Posted by: BAAL [Member] On: March 9, 2006 )

Nae/ Of Lead Projectiles
Renae- Good to read you again.

Seeing both you and Lans back on page one is refreshing.

Interesting acrostic subliminals: "It," "uS"...SAD"

Enjoyed read,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 9, 2006 )

Wow...Nae'a back too!
Great to find you and Ivor back at home. Missed ya!

This was typical Nae...still on that journey to discovery. Keep the end, you may find that it was the journey...not the destination... that fulfilled you.

love ya,

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 10, 2006 )

Owning the words
Baal, I appreciate your feedback very much. I don't feel that words can hurt us unless everything we live is only in the written and we don't make our words our reality. I don't know if I am making sense but I know this is my truth. Thank you.

Bobby, I feel like a ghost around here. I miss this place but can't seem to get my feet back in. I am trying though. Thank you for the welcome.

Bob, your comments always make me fly. Writing with soul is what I dream of most. Hugs.

Bea, Missed you! My journey is filled with adventures, trust me Bea I love the ride way more than the destination!

Tap5000, you got what I am feeling dead on! Thank you so much!

Love to you all,
Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 10, 2006 )

You always seem to choose the right ones to say...and if perchance one should elude you...make up your own...Love having you back...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 10, 2006 )

Deep...a gateway
Extremely enticing, it's a very deep gateway to your soul...your words didn't fail you they just got me inside your world.

keep it up.
It's interesting getting to know you.


( Posted by: soulreflection [Member] On: March 12, 2006 )

Hi Nae, I've been out of touch for awhile as well, so it's nice to be back here and read such lovely and poignant poetry. Thanks for sharing!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: March 13, 2006 )

Words to friends
Kacee, it is nice to be back or be back somewhat anyway. Thank you sweetie.

Soul reflection, it is nice to let others into my world, welcome!

Welcome back Eleda! Thank you for stopping by.

Lucie, It is amazing how you always get me. Thank you so much my friend! Lots of love to you.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 18, 2006 )

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