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A new breath in
the old is left behind
Music drifts in the window
the sun shines purifying rays
One notebook replaces the last
thoughts are free from taint
I'm already gone
but still here
To master one's life
find peace with one's emotions
Goals for life
found by far too few

Believe in yourself, for you are your best encouragement.

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