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Listen, I hear the hearts of men beating in the distance.
Is it anger or fear that drives them?
Its not time to cry, its time to die.
Freedom is on the tip of my tounge, but I can't speak.
All I want to do is listen...



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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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The following comments are for "SHHHHHH!"
by PAPALAS

A fantasy inwith real anger
It's really haunting to get the piece so easily. I hope the readers will read it several times to feel it every time differently as I have done.

It's, to me at least, not a whisper, but a loud outcry, for "freedom" that's about to come forth as an "anger or fear" in brief but stern and bold through "tongue".

Somewhere in history, everywhere in individuals' minds, the maxim goes on and on and on...

So the incompleteness of the lines throw us into a riddle of identity that we cannot reveal.

I don't know what others say. I like it.

Regards,

Myth.
06.02.2006

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: March 6, 2006 )

THANKS MYTH
Thank you for understanding my piece.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: March 8, 2006 )





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