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screaming and shouting
in the night
you wish you had kept your door
closed

hatred and pain
every solitary day
you wish you were never
alive

loneliness and crying
yourself to sleep
because you have no happy
ending

leaving and dying
in the twilight
you wish you could just run
away

you wish.

------
Kellie Lachata


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