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Those songs filled with emotion
They make us feel things we thought were dead
Those lines that you couldnít speak
Play out in your head
Those situations like yours
Become your favorite forever.

you donít know her anymore

Itís that climax that makes us cry
And the quiescence of life that makes us want to die.
no more of it will she be able to take
no more of it will life make her ache.

She does not have a life
She does not have a chance
She has no one
and no one is her friend
Sheís saying goodbye without the hello
And she is finished without completing
Do you have a say?
she hoped that you did.

Itís that damn hook that makes us remember
You wished that you could stay in December
when you would stay forever in your world
when you would think there in your world

you donít know her anymore

Those songs filled with emotion
They make us feel things we thought were dead
Those lines that you couldnít speak
Play out in your head
Those situations like yours
Become your favorite forever.


Do you have a say?
she hoped that you did.
but you donít know her anymore
you donít know her anymore.

------
Kellie Lachata


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