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Too Far to walk
Over to the desk
Open up the drawer.

Monday comes too soon
And everyday hurts more
Now I want to leave
Your sight forever more

Don't come over now
Another day will come
You just don't understand
Sometimes I want to run.

Friday comes at last
Only see the sky
Running till I die.

Memories will last
Each thought in the past.

------
Kellie Lachata


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