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Pretty as a peach
with skin just as soft
A two year old princess
found the daddy she lost
the one in her dreams
who cuddled her at night
the daddy she found
and gave such a fright!
What was the bond?
conceived when she turned
her pretty little eyes
right into his soul
a part of him began to grow
deep inside his heart,
his soul
This once broken man
found salvation in her home
with that first look
she gave him
a natural born
Angel

You really are Dada Scuba for that little girl and her mother loves you just as much..just know that I am your friend and I will be here forever...Love yha lots Peace

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~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for "Alyssa"
by twistymisty

Wow!
This is amazing misty.

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: March 5, 2006 )





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