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I cry at night knowing
that I am not going
going to see you face
that I will be replaced
I have a flaming temper
knowing that you dont remember
every word that percies me
having a thought of what it would be if you loved me
lost in a world full of memorys.

thats my life!


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by pain

Pain's Pain
I'm in pain when I read posts that aren't proof read by the author, esp. when they're posted more than once. I often wonder how much of this kind of thing (crap) is a put-on. Wow, I feel better already. (Rant)

( Posted by: cjmiller [Member] On: March 10, 2006 )

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