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I needed you for me to feel whole and complete
You needed me to be your shining white knight
I needed you with every breath and heartbeat
You used me to fight your demons of the night
I needed you to share my homestead retreat
You used me to calm your feelings of fright
I needed your love to be enduring as concrete
You used me to make everything all right
I needed you to stand on your own two feet
You used me to relieve you of your plight
I never expected that you’d lie and cheat
You expected me to give up without a fight
I now live with your memories bittersweet
And you now have to live with that parasite!


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by Txpoet

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That was very expressive. I enjoyed reading this. The back and forth between I and You complimented each other perfectly. Great job. Keep writing.

( Posted by: silentgoodbye [Member] On: March 6, 2006 )





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