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He does show me I am strong enough

to change where change is needed

He does let me see the real me

in a way that is safe for me

He does not ever give up

when one who is weaker would

He does not let my harsh words

push him away

He never gives up

He shows me the truth

how unconditional love

overcomes all else.

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