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I'm tired and I'm dirty babe
Wont you give me a place to lay?
No there's been some kind of mistake
I'd never harm you that way
That's not the case

Bring it out, bring it out
Fill your head with doubt
Clear the dust from your vision
You could refute the truth
read it upon my face

I'm isolate and distressed
I've come to believe its all in my head
The skeletons in the closet
speak to me as I lie in bed

All in my head
Every mucked little notion
You could refute the truth
read it upon my face

The gods honest truth
resides in the dew of my eyes
Its all in my head

Bring it out, bring it out
Fill your head with doubt
Clear the dust from your vision
You could refute the truth
read it upon my face

I'm tired and I'm dirty babe
Wont you give me a place to lay?
No there's been some kind of mistake
I've never harm you that way
That's not the case

Make me feel safe
I'm tired babe


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The following comments are for "All In My Head"
by David_Loren

in your head
I found this poem a little difficult to read through - it didn't seem to flow very well; it had it's moments, but it wasn't consistent, and that made it a hard going in places.
There were some parts of it I really liked though - the bit about the skeletons speaking to you is fantastic. :-)

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: January 25, 2003 )





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