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I wish I could take away all the pain and queer feelings
I wish I could undo all the wrongs that I have done
I wish I could forget the memories I remember and remember the memories I forget
I wish I could be the type of person that knows the value of education, the power of faith, the satisfaction of hard work
I wish I could travel far away from the sources of my torment
I wish I could be true to myself and true to others
I wish I couldbe in control of my own destiny, my own fate, my own self
If I ever get to be in contorl, all my wishes will come true.

Ladies and Gntlemen...Juans Anatomy!!!

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The following comments are for "Wish I could"
by JuansAnatomy

take control
Seems to me that now that u know what it is u want, it's time that you take control and make these things happen. We create our own destiny. We are the masters of our fate. You have the power, take control and your wishes will be your reality. A very good poem.

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: March 3, 2006 )

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