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A cry from a consumerist

A beginning from the end

An attempt at being real

A glimpse of something wrong

A Way that goes against THIS


A voice that breaks this silence

A shock so very needed

This monotony so very numbing

This language so condenced

generalizing and non-specific

This end is only a beginning

This death is only for the living.

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