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The warm air turns
Colder than ever before
Hearts stop beating

In life there is hope
True destinies will arrive
Many will perrish

The light will stay on
Guiding those who seek it
Forever onward

In times of trouble
Always close but never there
Are those you need

Not all scars show. Not all wounds heal. You can't always see the pain someone feels.

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The following comments are for "Lost"
by IronMaiden

I liked this piece. The flow was even and the thoughts fit together nicely. I enjoyed this.
Keep writing.

( Posted by: silentgoodbye [Member] On: March 3, 2006 )

i enjoyed this very muchly so true.

( Posted by: DeMoNiCcHiLd [Member] On: March 3, 2006 )

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