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Look at me
What do you see?
it doesn't matter
It will never be enough.
Why can't I be me?

Can't live to your expectations.
Yet you push,
Force them upon me.
Your ideals,
Your beliefs.

All of your life,
You try to make mine.
I just want to be me,
Let me be me!

Why can't you see?
I cannot breathe
I cannot
Want to be you.

I will wear what I want
Say what I feel
Fly if I fel like flying
Cry if I feel like crying.
Do what I want to

Just let me alone.
I have faith in me
Why can't you?

Not all scars show. Not all wounds heal. You can't always see the pain someone feels.

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