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Barely Ten and in despair.
Just Thirteen and she did not care.
One year later, baby came along.
He motivated her to right all the wrong.
In her early Twenties, much different than her friends
Looking for stability, and someone who would stay until the end.
Now in her early Thirties, baby has become a man.
Life as she new it ended over night
Or maybe thatís the moment it began?

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The following comments are for "In a nutshell."
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Nice write. I like how you left an open ending to rouse the thought processes. Keep up the good work...Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: March 28, 2006 )

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