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Being with you is all
my heart wishes for,
still my mind knows
who you are,
what you are.

I’m pondering which would be
the lesser evil, the lesser pain:

having my heart ache
for not being with you,
or having my soul ache
for being at your side.

I know beneath the cruelness
has to be a heart,
just wondering whether there’s a chance
for me to bring it out…
Or should I just push you over the edge
ridding us all of the pain?



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by PamHKyle

confusing agony
a wonderful peace ..a gateway to your innermost feelings. flowing lucidly clear..felt your pain...and your joy

( Posted by: soulreflection [Member] On: March 3, 2006 )





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