The following comments are for "A gust of cold wind" by PamHKyle
i'm not sure if this was your intent, or if it was anything close to your intent, but i enjoyed the racial implication of "chilled white world." the quick imagery is just enough to paint the scene without too many factors, giving the reader a clear picture, while at the same time allowing that picture to go wherever they want it to go...well done.
Posted by: dmbrrphish7 [Member] On: February 27, 2006
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