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said “I want to burn
the treetops
into the midnight sky
line…”

the orange Siamese
steps once, twice
into the jam
session fantasizing
of tender, meaty
Whiskas

the wheels on the bus
go flat, flat, flat…
the bug on the windshield
goes splat, splat, splat…
the mouse in the corner
goes “fuck – CAT!! CAT!! CAT!!”

the orange Siamese
steps once, twice
into the jam
session fantasizing
of tender, meaty
Mouse

said “I want to burn
the treetops…”

sunken in vertical
almond iris glowing
in the midnight…

said “I want to burn
into the midnight sky…”


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to that cool mountain air on an appalachian trail, oooooh life is better there - yonder mountain string band


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