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For the ways I've changed, let them stay the same.
For the smile your sight for me brings.
Every happy tear, laughter ear to ear.
Thank you beautiful for the day.
For you body rising with the sun,
the starshine in your eyes.
All the quiet moments between us two.
Every silent word said from me to you.
Thank you gorgeous in every way.
For the way you look just standing there.
So innocent, sweet, alone.
The slightest glimpse of happiness lingers in your eyes.
May it always stay, every single day.
When together we are to stay.
So thank you miracle, for being beautiful...
on my ordinary day. ---To Mike


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