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One window is all I need,
To see through.
One hall in which to redide,
To live and feal secure.
One person I must talk to,
To spend life with.
One book to read,
A basis for my life.
One duty to attend to,
A purpose yet to stay.
One shread of realization,
A grasp of the destination that I shall attend.

This is compleatly metaphoricle.

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To live ones life free from the constraints of judgement is truely bliss.


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by crackpotpoet

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I liked the thought that you put into this poem. The flow was nice and I enjoyed reading it. I will be taking a look at what else you've written. I believe that you are an author to be followed...
One suggestion that I would make would be to spell check your work a little more closely before you submit it. Personally I have a beta who just goes through my work and tells me what I've spelled wrong. She is a life saver for me for I can never seem to find my own mistakes.

( Posted by: silentgoodbye [Member] On: March 3, 2006 )





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