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-angels are born in whispers of wind
around the roses of a field
intangled emotions like colors blend
into rooms of the heart and feel
cast not away the tear of a soul
but all that chokes the fading heart
whose trials in life are never told
who sits and waits 'til they are old
whose voice in silent nights unfold
to eventually sing their given part.


------
David T. Culver


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The following comments are for "For Tangela"
by moonrising36109

Nice,
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I find the freedom of it alluring

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: February 27, 2006 )





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