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Disappearing train
You came to me and sliced away the rain
You were all that kept me sane
But now its not the same
Disappearing train

Vanishing sky
You said you kept thinking of you and I
I thought you'd give a serious try
But instead I'm left to die
Vanishing sky

Disappearing train
No better time to mow me down again
Expecting table scraps the same
Kissing me in pain
Disappearing train

Precious thing of mine
I simply couldn't read each sign
At first it seemed a fair amount of time
But I was chewing on a lime
Precious thing of mine

Disappearing train
You always told me I was sane
I simply never saw your game
I'll give a doll your name
Disappearing train

Disappearing train
Please come back and cut away the rain
And make me feel that happy way again
Teasing all the same
Don't disappear again

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