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Pass the night
Passed
The fish net
Doors

And pass me
the
Wine
Because we
do
Them all

We do
The musty
stairway and
damp
Rusty tights

And
Yes we do
The
Sodomy
Sunday
Under blanket
Grey sky
special

It's a treat
Cold turkey
Served on a bed
of spiked
Veins and
black
eyes

And
Round here
It's the simplest
of our
lies

Our lives...


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