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Love Dust

I try to touch you
still
the only thing keeping me here
is the thought that maybe one day
I will
engulf your sweet
essence
feel like a better man in your
presence
no longer do my faults
weigh
meaningless
idiosyncrasies
these things no-one
sees
what's to become of
me?
I wish I could've
stayed
even in your
passing breeze
envelop me
I've
arrived
a starving
heart
a man, his love
forever trapped
inside

lamemansterms

------
If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!
~L.T


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The following comments are for "Love Dust"
by LamemansTerms

Love dust
Real nice touch sweet and sexy.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: February 21, 2006 )

sWEET &sEXY
hEY Legs Thanks for the commentg on Love dust, I really do appreciate you taking the time to comment.. I haven't been around here much of lkate are you new?
LT

( Posted by: lamemansterms [Member] On: February 23, 2006 )





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