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Living lies
trapped forever
all this crying
a prisoner of
my own hearts desire
Your all I want
but I just pushed away
now your gone
I don't know what to say
I wish you were here
I wish I never left
this pain I feel
it's all my fault
I ruined all hope
for you and me
but I'll wait forever
- You'll see
the things you've done
since we were apart
you ripped out my heart
and I don't even care
all this pain
I'd take it again
just to see you
the way it was when
when we were in love
but I was blind to see
now I'm gone
but your still here
with me
and even though
we made some choices
we both regret
I'm willing to forgive
and I'm willing to forget
our souls are one
are destiny's intertwined
I realize this now
and I know it's true
I love you more
than anything in this world
and we can NEVER be through

------
~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for "together"
by twistymisty

Aww
This poem makes me sad and miss my ex.

( Posted by: leeleslie [Member] On: February 24, 2006 )

Thanks
Hey hey thanks I wrote this poem about my ex boyfriend...actually most of my stuff is inspired by him so yha...thanks again man
Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: February 24, 2006 )





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