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Battle cimmences,
I see death and tragedy,
And I wonder why.

As the hawk flies high,
Sun glinting off his cruel beak,
Freedom soars on high.

Tall mountains and seas,
Terrain surrounded by air,
I see home sweet home.

Whispering softly,
Gently caressing my skin,
Once more in her arms.

I realize that,
These haikus are not the best,
Don't whant that anyway.

To live ones life free from the constraints of judgement is truely bliss.


The following comments are for "Random thoughts."
by crackpotpoet

random thoughts
You sound like a soldier fresh from war, looking down on his hometown from an airplane window. I think my imagination is too much.

( Posted by: SingChi [Member] On: February 19, 2006 )

I like this poem...It's very colorful and creative...Excellent poem..

( Posted by: Windsong [Member] On: March 1, 2006 )

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